Young gun

From this poem and clearly tell that this thought was one you get sometimes when you are not so busy. Though each one has his/her identity such as daughter,friend,teacher,sportsperson we ...

The poem ends on a very strong and painful note. The flashback of the memories is a very creative way of telling the reader about war.The realisation of the damage ...

This poem was not told conventionally like it generally is ,i.e. story form,which by the way,is perfectly is fine. I think the broken description is because of the tremendous fear ...

Though I am not quite good at understanding metaphors and hidden meanings,I still feel this was a good poem simply because of the description. The pride,arrogance and the sense of ...

You have some amazing storytelling ability. A big plus point for you is your ability to play with words which can be seen in every stanza. The hero/looser of this ...

Short,but very nice and effective is how I would describe what you have written. A little about the theme:This one was a common topic.People complaining about being ignored is something ...

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This is just insane.Apparently "Scrape" is a bad word in chat.I can figure out why, but the S is present at the beginning.Should this error be rectified? So is the ...

If you don't broadcast and market matter how good you are...you'll never be successfull.There is a difference between a best selling author and a good writer. Unless you dont broadcast ...

A good job for a first start.

It makes no sense in being a theist or an atheist at all.Belief or non belief in God cannot play a role in influencing what happens in your life. If ...

The story in the poem is very good and there is not much to say for a critique. I'll just quote some lines I liked: The sun soon sets, The ...